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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
senorlongo
(Edit) |
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Sep 3, 2012 |
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Terrible grammar and changing person willy nilly makes it hard to follow. It does need editing badly. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
PieterM
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Aug 24, 2012 |
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I guess I'm with the Major it need an editor.
I tried an edit but it becme something different, its on stories XNXX Little Pain Slut Slave2 if you want a look.
(2/10)
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| Reviewer:
Major Littmann
(Edit) |
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Aug 23, 2012 |
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A string of cliche s strug together badly with poor spelling,It wanders from third to first person and back during the first few paragraphs, then later randomly the first person is the attacker, then attackers then there are multiple pain sluts and he is to have his teeth legs and arms removed, erotic? hardly Probably written by a Gay man masquerading as a woman, thankfully short, too short at 6400 characters against a site minimum of 10 000, supremely dull, needs an editor and some descriptions. (2/10)
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- Replied by:
Lady Morgana
(Edit) (Aug 20, 2012)
- I'm pretty sure that my birth certificat says female jack ass!!!!!
- Replied by:
Misskera
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2012)
- Please read my review
- Replied by:
Major Littmann
(Edit) (Aug 23, 2012)
- Sorry, I didn't realise you were a Female Jackass
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| Reviewer:
total.slave
(Edit) |
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Aug 22, 2012 |
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Lady Morgana, Great start. Hope You will continue this story into a long one with lot of torture and pain. Lady Morgana You can also insert heavy steel rings in each of his balls. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Misskera
(Edit) |
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Aug 22, 2012 |
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I so can't wait for more. Also WTF I don't get how somone who reads stories on THIS site can judge someone like that. If you don't like it vote comment on the story. Why insult someone? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lady Morgana
(Edit) (Aug 22, 2012)
- thank you for the comment and for agreeing with me on the insult. he was rather rude.
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| Reviewer:
sharp
(Edit) |
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Aug 19, 2012 |
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A great start! Hopefully the story will develop into a long series involving a lot of scat! (9/10)
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