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Tom's Traumatising Transformation
Author: rbbral
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(Added on Feb 16, 2012)
(This month 26153 readers) (Total 44749 readers) |
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Tom, an obnoxious TV sex show host, investigates a rumour that an interactive SM website is non-consensual and involves women who have been abducted and forced to perform. Tom soon regrets his actions. |
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| Reviewer:
hb60
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Mar 7, 2012 |
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OMG! Could you do or say any more to inflame a poor submissive sissy??
Your story has hit with high elements of a masterfully structured tale of femdom and blatant forced feminization..... (10/10)
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- Replied by:
rbbral
(Edit) (Mar 7, 2012)
- Thanks for your nice comments, they encourage me to write some more.
PS Not all my stories are on this site, but all of them - mostly latex, femdom, forced and consensual, are on Gromets Plaza. See what you think.
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bloopcrash
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Feb 21, 2012 |
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I loved this story. Right up my alley. I check this site every so often looking for a good one with femdom and forced CD themes. Femdom stories tend to be lacking here unfortunately.
I hope you consider doing another chapter to continue with either Tom or even the cameraman who I forgot the name of. :p (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rbbral
(Edit) (Feb 22, 2012)
- Thanks for your comments. I have had a few emails from folks wanting a "sequel" as to what happens to Tom. I really have no plans for him, once finished I like to move onto other themes, stories, characters etc. It's pretty obvious I'm afraid he's truly buggered!
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jpozed
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Feb 19, 2012 |
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An excellent, deliciously cruel story. I would have preferred it if Tom hadn't accepted his fate so easily and had resisted more, but otherwise this was very satisfying. Michelle is a wonderfully evil character. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
rbbral
(Edit) (Feb 20, 2012)
- Thanks for commenting on my story, I always appreciate feedback, good or bad. It's funny, someone on this site criticised another story of mine, Stern Manor for being a bit disturbing, and yet this is much more so. I suppose you can't please all the people all the time. I had thought about Tom resisting more, and being further punished, but I don't know, maybe I felt a bit sorry for the fool in the end, and had him accepting his fate. Sometimes you start off with an idea, and then it goes off at a different tangent, hard to explain. Thanks again.
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