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Weighed
Average (?):  (4/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
Venom
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Rating: |
Sep 4, 2011 |
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Undeveloped -- that's the term which comes to my mind. Some bloke enters a bar, finds two girls kissing, takes one, all in the first two sentences... that's not a story, only the synopsis of a crude fantasy. And it's not well written, either. Almost every sentence shows the same structure, without any feeling for style or narrative qualities. 3/10 is the maximum for this. You can make more of your ideas! (3/10)
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