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Amanda Plays for Keeps
Author: nahanom
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(Added on Jul 4, 2011)
(This month 188150 readers) (Total 238946 readers) |
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Amanda Ryan is a vibrant young woman who likes to play rough, likes to play by her own cruel rules and just loves to play for keeps when she can get away with it. And the sadistic and sexy seductress has a real knack for getting away with it once she has a boy in her embrace. She’s looking forward to using her husband and two teenage sons to experience the ultimate sadistic thrill. In the meantime she satisfies her wicked needs by torturing and snuffing young men who fall under her irresistible spell. |
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| Reviewer:
stimpy
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Oct 22, 2011 |
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Excellent story, well written, interesting, and very, very hot. (10/10)
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lisenok
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Sep 18, 2011 |
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As I understand it, the U.S. struggles with smoking. And that is why smoking suddenly became something fucking erotic. And if they ban hamburgers, you'll jerk off to Ronald McDonald?
If I see a story in the codes of F / m, youth, I expect to see a woman playing with a boy. Instead, they are tortured fucking daddy with cigarettes and a defibrillator.
Big, fat daddy. In shorts and a hairy beer belly. Homer Simpson on the rack - who likes it? (6/10)
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douglas858
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Sep 18, 2011 |
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one of the nice story I have ever read. I like this theme. mature domina with young boy. You are a very good writer also. Keep writing on this theme. (10/10)
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wistan
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Sep 10, 2011 |
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Great story - well written, with great pacing and flow, good exploration of the character and her motivation and excellent action.
I love stories with women like this, women who know just what they want to do and are absolutely unrelenting about doing it. Wonderful, wonderful stuff! (10/10)
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mike willey2
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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This story was just the type of story I like -- slow torture ending in snuff and with imagination. (10/10)
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paulsub158
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Jul 17, 2011 |
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well written and enjoyable (10/10)
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slaveatif
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Jul 17, 2011 |
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very very good story.
very well written
story is great
i want to become slave of such brutal , killer lady
i want to read more from this writer (10/10)
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hb60
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Jul 15, 2011 |
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OMG! I just hope your not a female..... Just knowing that a female mind wrote this would be scary. If your a dude, well you have made quite a contribution to the BDSM library!! Excellent story! (10/10)
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slave4life901
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Jul 10, 2011 |
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This is an excellent story. The tortures are quite sadistic. I loved it. I really hope this story continues (9/10)
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Venom
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Jul 5, 2011 |
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This narration is one of those which should be printed, framed and hung on the wall.
First of all, it really tells a story. It's of exquisite cruelty and mostly manages to avoid clichés.
Some minor flaws can be found. For example, Amanda learns from her victim's ID that his age is twenty. Later we are told it is twenty-one. But that is of no consequence for the rating. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rich
(Edit) (Sep 17, 2011)
- Beautifully sadistic and violent narrative. Looking forward to future instalments.
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