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A Trip
Author: KingsCross
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(Added on Jun 11, 2011)
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Girls trip to see her new owner for first time, travel plans change. |
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jul 3, 2011 |
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promising start. the paragraphs were a little too long so future chapters would benefit from more paragraph breaks, to make it easier on the reader.
content was good. am looking forward to the next chapter. btw, she flew out on a "plane" not a "plain". (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jun 13, 2011 |
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Unreadable blocks of text. Didn't appear to be worth my time to struggle through. Every time a different character speaks there should be a new paragraph. Makes me wonder why the few breaks there are were inserted. (3/10)
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