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Pentonbridge Pig
Author: Garmonbozia
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(Added on May 30, 2011)
(This month 155292 readers) (Total 210890 readers) |
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The story of one woman's prison sentence in a very special penitentiary. |
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| Reviewer:
saskatchewanslut
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Jan 28, 2012 |
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A truly excellent story that has kept me panting for more. Emily's tale is so beautifully crafted and so inventive that it has, for me, set a new benchmark for the humiliation/degradation genre.
A prison tale that is so very different from the majority of the women's prison stories out there. This one avoids almost all of the cliched norms and paints a completely fresh picture of life in this "special" women's prison.
Emily's tale is one of such constant degradation and unrelieved tension that I could only read it in small sections, a few chapters at a time. Emily is given no time to relax or attempt to accustom herself to the harsh regime and even though the delicious storytelling kept me wet throughout, I still could not help but feel a little sorry for Emily and the constant trouble she would find herself in. The frustration of being unable to do anything right, for fault to be found in even your best efforts to behave and conform was almost overhwelming.
The first time I started this story, I stopped reading after four chapters. I was incredibly turned on but I felt it was a little harder and harsher than I am used to. But I could not get Emily and Pentonbridge out of my mind. I had to come back and am now a firm convert, anxiously anticipating each chapter.
The way each scene is delved into, the degradation, humiliation and pain is lingered upon and celebrated, allowing the reader to embrace each and every situation is brilliant. There is no sex here, and after almost 25 chapters I think I have a feel for the story, and I honestly say I hope there never is. Please don't fall into the cliches and have male visitors use Emily. It would just be so wrong.
The characters are so lovingly crafted and perfectly suit the story. Each guard has their own flavor and even the inmates, though little more than scenery so far, are so deftly woven into the story that it all just feels so real. I didn't think things could get any better and then along came Boss, so looking forward to that relationship growing.
My only criticism is that the author doesn't write fast enough.
(10/10)
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Misschief
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Jan 8, 2012 |
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Humiliation...yes, thoroughly exciting..
antithetically, reading this endless prattle, which lingers excessively, taking ample time to indulge fecal, verbal, and excessively violent (yet sexually pointless) drivel.. not sexy..
yes, we get it.. you get off on the whole comparison between women and pigs.. how about some hardcore intercorse..? (2/10)
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- Replied by:
cranberry
(Edit) (Aug 1, 2014)
- sexual intercourse is 'vanilla' How about even more humiliation and discipline?
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| Reviewer:
Qmoq
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Nov 25, 2011 |
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I echo the previous comments - the consistent high quality and fantastic descriptions of cruelty are superb.
I feel very sympathetic towards Emily though, and almost want her to catch a break now and then! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
popandlock
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Aug 19, 2011 |
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Wow, I didn't even know this story existed until I read your blog. Thanks so much. This story is amazing. I love the harshness and how pig struggles with everything each and every day. And you know the best and suprising thing I have found. These stories are funny too, there is a real wit there and I actually laughed a few times. Strange I know but if that can happen in this kind of story then you know its something special. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
dssmmaster
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Jun 21, 2011 |
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Like your story.
Can not wait for the next part. Keep on going! (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 2, 2011 |
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I can only say one thing about this story, actually, two things.
One, it's the best female prison-based story I have ever encountered, with scenes veering from the incredibly erotic to the most vile sadistic deeds. One thing that makes this story stand out, is the wonderful painting of the main character, Emily, who's inner musings are so deliciously depicted it makes her sound like Alice In Wonderland, exept that the natives aren't that friendly.
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Garmonbozia
(Edit) (Jun 5, 2011)
- Thanks JJ,
After a long hiatus I am back writing and glad that my first story found an audience. Happy to announce that Emily's travails shall continue through many more chapters. As always, any and all feedback is welcome. I write only to be read, so I'm always happy to hear everyone's thoughts - they can only make me better.
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