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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Laura.Dane
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May 17, 2011 |
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Nicely executed, the story drew me in and held my interest. I will very much be reading anything else you write. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nassim
(Edit) (May 17, 2011)
- Thank you! I've been thinking of revising chapter 1 and extensively changing and rewriting chapter 2 - what do you think?
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Apr 5, 2011 |
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Interesting! Well written, could use some proofing. Explicit scene description but waiting for some bdsm. Maybe next chapter? (8/10)
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- Replied by:
nassim
(Edit) (Apr 28, 2011)
- Thank you. This is going to be at least four parts when I'm finished, so I'll eventually get around to it, hope the taste of BDSM in Chp 2 was adequate.
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