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Best at Show
Author: Khaine
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(Added on Oct 11, 2010)
(This month 67274 readers) (Total 76088 readers) |
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A girl is trained in depravity. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
inicole05
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Aug 16, 2011 |
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Other then a few spelling problems it was perfect. I was wet the whole time I read it. (8/10)
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Misschief
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Nov 13, 2010 |
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I enjoyed the imagery presented at many points throughout the story. The ideas presented in the story were quite arousing. The prose and transitions felt awkward at times, though.
Exceeds in quality 75% of the stories I have read thus far. As above, the imagery presented in the story was great; I loved the submissive being denied the right to speak and I love the training aspect.
To the author: My compliments on your grasp of erotic power exchange. Would love to read more. (7/10)
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