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Vignettes: A Zest for Kidnapping
Author: Xspy4u
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(Added on Jun 17, 2010)
(This month 53993 readers) (Total 64829 readers) |
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A little tale about a woman abducted and abused by a mysterious stranger |
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| Reviewer:
littleone__
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Feb 9, 2012 |
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I took JimmyJump's recommendation on this one and I am glad I did. The ending was a bit predictable perhaps. The story is a sold nine. I recommend it also. (9/10)
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Sojurboy
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Oct 26, 2010 |
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Very real, and I imagined myself there. Good idea, keep up the good work. I know the brain strain is tough, but the more you write the more facile it becomes. I want more!! (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 17, 2010 |
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Well structured and evenly paced, "A Zest For Kidnapping" is the kind of short which has an interesting build-up, going crescendo --like Ravel's "Bolero"-- both with the abductor's actions as with the abductee's reactions (and the reader's heartbeat), right til the very satisfying end. An end which, for once, makes the circle round.
Another one of those stories which doesn't stand out due to its subject, but by the way the subject is handled. In this case, extremely well.
I only hope, should Xspy4u choose to add further vignettes, it will happen in separately uploaded stories --for reviewing sake-- instead of adding them to this essay...
JJ (10/10)
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- Replied by:
xspy4u
(Edit) (Jun 17, 2010)
- As always JJ you should get a reward for the time and effort you put into review writing - my thanks, as for your request - yes each will be a separate upload as the chapter writing pressure is killing me :)
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