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A Thanatos Birthday Party
Author: Picana
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(Added on Jun 9, 2010)
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Sweet sixteen Priscilla finds herself in the clutches of the sadistic Thanatos Society, courtesy of her adoptive parents. Very cruel and evil story. |
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| Reviewer:
coyote3k
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Mar 16, 2012 |
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I really liked it and I hope you continue adding to it. You lived up to the original Thanatos stories and still made it your own. Great! I've read "Prissy gets sore titties" several times. (10/10)
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grinner666
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Jun 15, 2010 |
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Imaginative and well written from a strictly technical perspective. Unfortunately (and this is by NO means a problem unique to this author), there is an almost complete lack of dramatic tension because the story contains no conflict. This is, unfortunately, a problem in a great many BDSM stories ... there's no conflict because there's no resistance on the part of the victim or sub, even in thought. So ... it's a hot and well written scene, but it's not really a story because nothing really happens. Still, hot plus imaginative isn't a bad place to start. ;) (7/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jun 12, 2010 |
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Using captions usually doesn't work too well, except when working on a screenplay. Here, however, it adds to the distant yet intimate documentary style.
The writing is above par, which, in combination with said documentary style, gives some interesting reading material.
JJ (8/10)
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