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Lizzie's Miami Vice
Author: Pagan
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(Added on Mar 16, 2002)
(This month 52450 readers) (Total 65575 readers) |
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The couple wanted to have a great vaction at Miami. But they arrived at wrong time and what happened was the least they expected. |
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Average (?):  (4/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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way to predicatable (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
rcb
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Jun 27, 2003 |
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Good though somewhat predictable story -- needs better editing for grammatical errors (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
mikey
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Mar 16, 2002 |
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I tried to read it but the grammar, punctuation and writing was so bad. Each paragraph was one long sentence, mis-spellings, poor grammar, etc.
The story might be good but if the writer can't even spend enough time to write well, I am not going to spend the time to read it.
(3/10)
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