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Weighed
Average (?): (6/10) |
Average
Rating: (7/10) |
Highest
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Reviewer:
Curtis
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Apr 7, 2010 |
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Same matter-of-fact style as your other story, but it doesn't work as well (for me) in this one. You could stand to get a little more in the heroine's head, as you did in the second chapter of the other one. Maybe the difference this time was the lack of bdsm content? I'm tempted to say this story belongs more on the Literotica site than on this one. Oh, and please start including story codes. (7/10)
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