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The Taking of Tabby
Author: Slibione
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(Added on Dec 20, 2009)
(This month 54537 readers) (Total 80878 readers) |
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How Tabby became my own personal Slut. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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I hope that the "year of teasing and tempting online" are gonna be featuring in further chapters. Else, there's some serious skipping here. The world-record kind.
Too many instances where explanations are given which don't matter and others where the pace is making time pass in a blur of nothingness.
The writing is okay, the sex is nice. But the story is suffering from anorexia.
"The Taking Of Tabby" needs to be worked out properly to become a good story. Now we are being presented with bits and pieces of personalities, half worked-out ideas and a relationship which is over a year old without knowing who's the other person. Except that she's a 'nice' lady which hides a 'nasty slut' underneath... Yeah, right.
I know most 'writers' here are only in it for the exiting bits, but that doesn't mean they have to skip whole books just to get to where they want to be. Doesn't work. "Tabby" Doesn't work. Not very well, at least.
JJ (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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May 6, 2010 |
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Great story i cannot wait to read the other parts. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
MasterBaron1945
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Dec 25, 2009 |
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very nice evoloution
ill bet there is lotsleft to come!
Keep up the good work (10/10)
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