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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
significantother
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Jul 16, 2011 |
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Characters are well rounded and behave like human beings and thought has obviously been put in to avoid distracting cliches. Top story - I'll be looking out for future chapters/stories. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
elton_segal
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Feb 19, 2011 |
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Wow this is one great story perhaps the best here well detailed and written please keep writing. You have an amazing gift of detailing things Amazed please keep up the good work and share your mail address would like to know u better (9/10)
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Snark
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Dec 16, 2010 |
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Superb! Not so much as a bdsm tale(though that is certainly a major component of it) but rather a tale of personal standards and mental strength. While indentured servitude hasn't been legal for a while, who knows what lies in the near future. Well written, though some of the time sequences seem flaky, plus a name change that threw me for a little while. Nevertheless a solid entertaining read with room for plenty of tales left to be told. PLEASE give a summery on future stories. This one slipped under my radar...I would have like to have started it sooner. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
mechgogo
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2011)
- Ok, if this seems like a double it's because the Library just told me I wasn't logged in when I was sure I was. Thanks for the review. Sorry I didn't reply sooner but I never got the notification . I admit there's been a certain...flex with the timeline that I'm trying to nail down. Pretty sure I got that fixed.imagery. As for the summary the funny thing is I include one every time a chapter is submitted (hehehe puns) but a bug swept through the Library and erased the summaries from dozens of entries. GLad you're enjoying it so far. I'll be posting another chapter soon. In the meantime thanks again and I hope the New Year is treating you well.
Cheers!
Mech
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| Reviewer:
WatchBits
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Jan 26, 2010 |
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This is well written, with believable charactors and settings. I enjoyed the details and backstory, it made for a much more fullfilling read. I cannot wait to read more! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
mechgogo
(Edit) (Feb 19, 2011)
- Thanks Watch, glad you're enjoying it. Keep reading and I'll keep writing. Cheers!
Mech
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