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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Oct 12, 2010 |
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Michael Alexander pulled a Meat Loaf on me, as he took the words right out of my mouth.
JJ (9/10)
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Michael247
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I have to admit, that I'm really starting to like T.M. Goode's writings. He has a particular bent that screams creativity in ways I've never particularly imagined, mostly because I've always thought that the type of bondage Mr. Goode describes is massively difficult to handle and isn't very realistic. But hey, this is fiction, not to mention the fact that if this WERE real life, then the way this happened worked out just fine. Hmmm...I guess I need to get one of those little rubber suits for...oh. Sorry. Just musing. Never mind.
*** I only have a few criticisms for Sixteen Candles. The first is that there were a few (and I mean like a very small number) of little errors. They were so minor they didn't even bother me. The second criticism is the way that the two masterminds behind the abduction disposed of their flunkies. A small charge that cut the brake lines and power steering? Too many things could have gone wrong with that, and usually even brakes will work a little bit if the line is cut...at least for a moment. And if they van was only going 35 miles per hour, they still would have worked for at least one pump to slow the van down. I DO like the fact that the incendiary charge was in the engine to cut the power and brake lines. Cops will look near the gas tank for the charge and hopefully the small package and odd location will yield few results for the forensics team. I also think its a mistake for Eric to be the one to inform the cops of his brother's death. Cops latch on to anyone involved. He'll be a suspect of course, but he's an immediate suspect if he's the one to report the murder, and his ridiculous story is only going to raise a big red flag to any cop he tells. Of course, its possible he isn't doing any of that, but merely told Hanna he was in order to screw with her mind.
*** Now let's talk about Hanna's son. Weird twist. I didn't even know Hanna HAD a son. Was it mentioned anywhere at the beginning? For a reveal of such a evil character, (and this goes the same for Eric)it would have been nice to give us a bit of foreshadowing at the beginning, rather than surprise us with new surprise characters right at the end. Plus, I couldn't help feeling just a bit repulsed buy the suggestion of impending incest. There weren't any story codes, so I wasn't prepared for it. It just left a slightly sour taste in my mouth, which didn't have any effect on my rating for this story.
*** Lastly, I can't help wishing this story went on longer. Oh...not because I love the author's writing, even though I do, but because I can't help feeling a bit unsatisfied. I realize that the author's focus is of course the full body restraints and latex/rubber combo. Me personally, loved the little accessories and the laptop computer program that did little fun things to both mom and daughter. I almost wished that at the end both women would be extracted from their restraints and put on something new to spend the night. To be honest, I shouldn't really complain about this. The author gets to do what he wants.
*** So all in all if you haven't read this story yet, ignore the spoilers in the review and read it. Then read the rest of this author's work. It's worth it. Michael Alexander (www.michaelalexander.com) (9/10)
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