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     Weighed
      Average (?):  (4.5/10) | 
   
   
    Average 
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    Highest 
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    Lowest 
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    | Reviewer: 
    masostud
  (Edit)     | 
    Rating:  | 
    Jan 10, 2011 | 
   
   
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        An interesting theme but poor in its expression. There is no real tension and peak. The story could be improved ... (4/10) 
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    | Reviewer: 
    wistan
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    Rating:  | 
    Nov 28, 2010 | 
   
   
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        Nice enough story, but it lacks any real punch. The writer makes a couple of silly mistakes with spelling and such ("my cock swiveled up to nothing" doesn't make sense), and there's a rather unbelievable quality to it - having sex a lot will NOT make your cock grow three inches! There's no real dialogue, or attempt to build characters, just a long sting of "we did this and that and I loved it so much and from then on we always did this other thing..." It's okay on that basis, but there's much room for improvement. (4/10) 
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