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The Weekly Card Game
Author: Mar989
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(Added on Mar 29, 2009)
(This month 52242 readers) (Total 58682 readers) |
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Two young wives find the stakes raised in the weekly game. |
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Weighed
Average (?): (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating: (8.5/10) |
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Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 12, 2012 |
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Well written story, sadly hampered by the spelling-out of the slap noises and consequent moans or screams... Those things are usually reserved for text balloons in comic strips... JJ (8/10)
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Reviewer:
Malus
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Feb 25, 2010 |
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Good story with a nice setup for another chapter. (9/10)
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