|
|
|
|
|
Bad End: Donations
Author: Razor7826
|
| |
(Added on Feb 14, 2009)
(This month 50606 readers) (Total 62639 readers) |
| |
A young woman gets caught stealing from her church by a fellow parishioner. |
| Ratings and Reviews: |
| Number
of Ratings: 2 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
| 1 |
2 |
3 |
4 |
5 |
6 |
7 |
8 |
9 |
10 |
| 0% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
50% |
0% |
0% |
0% |
50% |
0% |
|
Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
Highest
Rating:  (9/10) |
Lowest
Rating:  (5/10) |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
grinner666
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 17, 2009 |
| |
Nice story idea, good characters and great descriptive text ... spoiled by rushing to the ending.
(5/10)
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
Rating: |
Feb 17, 2009 |
| |
Very good story, well written and thoroughly enjoyable. No flaws whatsoever (almost) and three-dimensional, solid characters...
The end, on the other hand, takes away half the fun of the story. For as believable as the whole story is, the ending is not. In a small community, it wouldn't take long before someone came a knocking at Keith's door. Back and front.
And stop referring to your characters as 'he' or 'she' too much. They have names, use 'em.
JJ (9/10)
|
|
|
About 