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Alison\'s new life
Author: Randy Wasser
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(Added on Feb 1, 2009)
(This month 49958 readers) (Total 60706 readers) |
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Alison and her husband sell themselfs into slavary. |
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| Reviewer:
kemosabe
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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Misspellings, incomplete sentences, poor use of words. As if that isn't enough, the plot was so bizarre, it was boring. Sorry, this doesn't hold any promise (2/10)
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JimmyJump
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Feb 3, 2009 |
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I appreciate your efforts Randy, but I strongly urge you to read a few more well-written stories to see how it's done, before trying your hand at writing.
Well-intentioned try, but lacking on all fronts really.
JJ (4/10)
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