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    An American In Hell
    
    Author: Unknown
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    (Added on Jan 16, 2002)
            (This month 75342 readers) (Total 90329 readers) | 
   
   
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    A demon from hell is sent back to earth to create souls for hell. He rescues a girl about to get raped then grants her the power to change herself, BUT if she commits any sins, no matter how insignificant, she becomes a characture of what she wished for. Enjoy her horror struct realization of just how extreme that characturization can become. | 
   
 
 
   
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    redEva
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    Jul 4, 2005 | 
   
   
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        I loved it!  I love the idea, the absurdity and monstrosity of it all, the catch 22 and inevitability.  Great idea, could use some better dialogue, but I did not have the feeling author was going for Shakespeareism – rather for fun.  I loved it!  (7/10) 
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    mkemse
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    May 5, 2004 | 
   
   
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        give me a break (3/10) 
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        Pro: Not a bad idea, with acceptable spelling and grammar. Con: Poor storytelling and little style. Total lack of erotic/BDSM content. (5/10) 
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    SecretWorld
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    Jan 27, 2002 | 
   
   
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        I like shapeshifting stories, but this one had NO SEX!!  Big boobs, yes, but the girl isn't even humiliated by it, she's just bugged. (3/10) 
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