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Missed Payment
Author: M Eros
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(Added on Oct 30, 2008)
(This month 65170 readers) (Total 89476 readers) |
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Anna misses the first payment to the |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Chuckdom19
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Nov 7, 2008 |
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Harsh, rough story, good in spite of some wrong words (taunt instead of taut, for example). Well told, exciting. Is there to be a missed second payment? (8/10)
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TheDoctorIsIn
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Nov 3, 2008 |
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Nice story with a good flow. Brutal, but for this story I'm glad everyone remained alive. Sometimes living with the pain and shame is more effective than death. (8/10)
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mike uk reader
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Nov 2, 2008 |
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Another great high quality powerful story from M. EROS.
Once again despite a few spelling mistakes here and there he keeps the story flowing wonderfully well. My kind of erotic fiction at it's best.
Looking out for much more from this author very soon.I hope (9/10)
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JonMaddux
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Nov 2, 2008 |
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I enjoyed the plot it had that dont screw over the mafia ring to it. The english is a little rough but i felt it was a second language issue possibly and not just your being in a hurry, which is what usually messes up my stories i think. Over all i think you did a great job. I enjoyed the fact the man new he was a sadist, it explained why he was happy to not simply sodomize her but make it hurt! He obviously knows forced sodomy is the worst thing she could endure and enjoyed putting her through it! (8/10)
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