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The Apprentice
Author: Bobo
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(Added on Oct 12, 2008)
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A woman discovers a way to bring her sadistic feelings out into the real world |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
susankarlson
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Jun 11, 2016 |
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I do like a sadistic woman, so I was deslighted to read this story. The cruel heroine is deliciously perverted. I hope the author has similar adventures for her to enjoy. This is a re-read, and I had forgotten that I have already complimented Bobo on his story. His reply promised more....I hope it is not too long to keep me waiting. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
susankarl
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Feb 11, 2009 |
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I liked the story very much, especially as the sadist featured is a woman, which is my own favourite feature.
I do hope my namesake and her new operator get to work together soon.
Keep up the good work. Susan. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Bobo
(Edit) (Feb 13, 2009)
- Thank you for your nice review.I am glad you are enjoying the story and your wish will be granted--working on chapter 10
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JimmyJump
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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Interesting premise, well executed. Only minor flaws, like using the same word(s) too often too soon (the word 'bit', used 3 times in 3 consecutive sentences; but that's me being picky) or the story tending to lack emotion at times .
Thoroughly enjoyable, thanks to the nice characterizations and good pace.
JJ (9/10)
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Mothbrad
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Jan 18, 2009 |
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A great story with a theme that is a bit rare - a person being inducted into a world of sadism (rather than masochism, which, as a theme, seems extremely common). I thought the writing was very engaging, and hope that now that a critical point in the story has been reached, that you (Bobo) keep the interest up to continue. (9/10)
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Perverpeper
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Nov 1, 2008 |
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Love these first six chapters. As a french reader, i'm not able to make a reliable judgement about your writers skills but i love the story.
Good atmosphere with some snuff and danger in a resolutely bdsm environment.
Some promising ideas about lesbosBDSM I'm waiting with eagerness.
I like the psychological thougts and descriptions from the first character
A regret, the action could be a little bit more present in the first six chapters.
Thanks for this pleasant tale
I attribute a ten to raise the first comment which seems a bit lower for me. (sorry for my poor english)
PP
http://www.perverpeper.com (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
masterdw
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Oct 13, 2008 |
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Not a bad idea, but writing is uninspired and spelling is terrible, yo the extent that it interfered with reading the story. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
mike uk reader
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2008)
- The male or female author's place their stories into the BDSM Library after very much effort on their part for nothing and the least you can do is send a constructive review to this author (Bobo). The spelling is NOT (yo) terrible, just one letter is missing on the very last line of the story. Uninspired, Get a life.
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mike uk reader
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Oct 12, 2008 |
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My honest praise must go to the author of this three part story start,although it contains snuff of which some may want to shy away from and very little in the way of sexual pleasures.
What you have is the long well written build up to a woman seeking more than the customary s/m games by an author with some special aptitude to detail that would put some published narratives to
shame.
It is not a stroke story nevertheless who knows what the future holds in promised chapters to come?
Well done looking out for more soon.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Bobo
(Edit) (Oct 13, 2008)
- Thank you for the nice review--and the nice post to the other review--well said.
Bobo
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