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Suspension
Author: Slave Kolkata
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(Added on Sep 10, 2008)
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Story of young Anita who dared to challenge her college senior Julie to defy a ragging. The authority suspended Julie which made her abduct Anita and get the bitch out of her. |
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| Reviewer:
Dusty Spring
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Feb 6, 2010 |
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Whole sections are missing, and all composition is missing. Don't waste your time reading it. Excuse me - Trying to read it. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Sep 12, 2008 |
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Virtually unreadable. I've never bothered to review one like this. Please either: a. get an editor who speaks and writes in English as a primary language or b. learn yourself. Sorry about this. (1/10)
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heycarrieanne
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Sep 12, 2008 |
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This is just bad! You have chapter titles, but nothing written under them. Your grammar is so bad, I can only think English is not your first language. This needs serious work done to it to be readable. (3/10)
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