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Jenny and Lily
Author: Wiley Hunter
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(Added on Jun 1, 2008)
(This month 57040 readers) (Total 70602 readers) |
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A story told completely through dialog. Jenny, a young girl caught in a compromising position, is forced by her brother to entertain a neighbor. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 7, 2009 |
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Same style as "A Gift For Samantha", which I read earlier.
Again, well done, as it's not that obvious to paint a clear picture simply through dialogue. But it works fabulously.
JJ (10/10)
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ramses
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Jul 28, 2008 |
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This story resembles a play you can hear on the radio. We would like to know what happened between the girl and the neighbour though. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
darkavenger
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Jun 10, 2008 |
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Bravo, the dialog says it all. Consider a director's cut with the scene in the bedroom between the neighbor and the delectable sister. Some of us would like to 'hear what was said' during that 3 hours (in fastforward of course). (10/10)
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