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A Trip to My Zoo
Author: Jamec
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(Added on Apr 9, 2008)
(This month 11129 readers) (Total 22519 readers) |
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A tour of a private erotic zoo. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
| Average
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Oct 2, 2008 |
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There is promise for this story. Unfortunately, there were quite a few errors that could have been easily corrected. Furthermore, the style was terribly simplistic - as if the author had a notion of what he wanted to present without having the understanding of how to present it. Finally, this little tale felt quite rushed. As a consequence, I could not get all the way through it - I wanted out before I could get to the end. A story should not do that to a reader. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jin
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Apr 15, 2008 |
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Very unique. And told in a interseting way. (7/10)
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