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The Birthday Gift
Author: MasterM
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(Added on Apr 9, 2008)
(This month 53085 readers) (Total 64481 readers) |
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A slave is given to a young man at his 21st party as a gift from her Master |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Wiley Hunter
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Apr 18, 2008 |
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I tend to avoid stories written in the second person, since they are rarely any good--the story-teller is both too close and too far from the protagonist to tell a good story.
MasterM, though, has produced a fine example of how it should be done. Very good, very hard story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
TwoToeTom
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Apr 17, 2008 |
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Nice little tail...
Creative and well done. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Apr 15, 2008 |
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Very, very nice. Well written; nice viewpoint.
Also I liked the way she was used and abused. The young men behaving as 21 year olds would, not respecting the owner's property.
Loved it. (9/10)
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