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Point of No Return
Author: Sandra Ciancio
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(Added on Jan 11, 2008)
(This month 51998 readers) (Total 64451 readers) |
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M is taken by her Master to a place to be shared and transformed into a proper slave. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Feb 17, 2009 |
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I thought that the story was lovely. Well written with good characterizations too.
The odd formatting seems due to the quirks of the website, as all is fine when copying the text to notepad.
Anyway, very well done, Miss Ciancio.
JJ (10/10)
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master B
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Jan 18, 2008 |
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Ive read Sandras other works and have enjoyed her revealing her mind to us. I sometimes wonder how much of this is from her own real experience. UNLIKE the other reviewer, Im not as much interested in literary form but the content of the story....you can have good grammer but still not get the point across.
Sandra Got the point across.
Look forward to more of her works
(9/10)
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CoughDrop
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Jan 16, 2008 |
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Sandra, I gave you a 2 rating because your format was line upon line.. Please, learn the loveliness of paragraphs! And the pleasure of a story plan.
We're dying to know what you might offer us next, make our waiting worth the while ;) (2/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Feb 17, 2009)
- Should you have had the luminous idea of copying and pasting the text to notepad, you would have seen that in notepad, the paragraphs do appear as if by magic.
That means, CoughDrop, that Sandra isn't to blame for the odd format, but the website.
Since your rating was solely based on the formatting, I surmise that you will be courteous enough to adapt your score accordingly...
JJ
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