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Breast Work: My tits love wire brushes
Author: Ashley Thompson
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(Added on Dec 30, 2007)
(This month 96402 readers) (Total 139704 readers) |
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A young woman returns from work after using her tits to tantalize the men. It's all part of a design to have her breasts tormented in a unique way, a totally demented alteration of them. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
erdnelv
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Mar 10, 2008 |
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great story, i love the F/F part to come, can't hardly wait for the next chapter. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Mar 10, 2008)
- Thank You e,
I don't think You'll be disappointed. If I fail you, please tell me. Ashley
- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Mar 13, 2008)
- More will be coming soon
- Replied by:
erdnelv
(Edit) (May 18, 2008)
- soon??
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 3, 2008 |
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A hot, hot story. I'm not sure I care entirely for the colors, underlines, and font size changes, but it does seem to intensify things. Good job! Hope there is more.
2/3 Further indignities and disasters to what portend to be sweet and lovely breasts... sad but oh, so exciting to think about, fantasize on, share in small ways with my subbie. Lovely ideas and evil dreams (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Mar 10, 2008)
- I'm so glad you can share me in some way. Perhaps I can fuel your future dreamtime. Ashley
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| Reviewer:
Polecat
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Jan 5, 2008 |
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Except for all the underlining in the first part, it is perfect. Hot, Hot, Hot. Outstanding (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
WhatTheCuff!
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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We find it doesn't have to stay at the breast fixation, but why not!
Is it gonna be dragged into her job routine where she unsuccessfully tries to hide it from the colleagues while having to suffer from the rough bra materials or worse more all the time ?)
Great story in all aspects, keep goin creatively! (8/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Hello Cuff and thank you,
For future elements I'm a little limited by a personal need to stay with what actually happened back then.( I know that's poorly constructed but I'm not thinking with my head right now.) I've included a bit of fiction so far. Just a bit.
Next chapters? There's a little of Tantalus in me and I can be a terrible tease ( had you guessed?) so please stay with me. You never know when a girl really needs a burlap-lined bra. If you are displeased with your servant, be hard on her. Discipline is good.
kisssss, Ash
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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interesting layout for a story, but good, i hope youp lan to add more (9/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Thank You, Mkemse,
There is a lot more that happened that weekend. I'd say the cruelty increased. I'll let you be the judge. Please don't be easy on me. I can use the discipline. Keep after me. kisss, Ash
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| Reviewer:
stevie335
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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great (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Thank You, Stevie.
There is a lot more that happened that weekend. I'd say the cruelty increased. I'll let you be the judge. Please don't be easy on me. I can use the discipline. Keep after me. kisss, Ash
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| Reviewer:
Lucifer
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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wow great story. is there gonna be more? i cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Jan 1, 2008)
- Dear Lucifer.mmmmm I Love your name. Wickedness personified. There is a lot more that happened that weekend. I'd say the cruelty increased. I'll let you be the judge. Please don't be easy on me. I can use the discipline. Keep after me. kisss, Ash
- Replied by:
Lucifer
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2008)
- hehe i picked that name for a reason. as for the second chapter its great. how much more can a person take i wonder. such a total painslut
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| Reviewer:
hiwiz4u3
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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wow :) an adventure worth reading...is there more ? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
ashley_craves_cruel
(Edit) (Dec 31, 2007)
- Hello, Hi, I'm glad you like what i like. Are you the S or the M? only curious. It was an amazing weekend. maybe the most sensually cruel ever. and I do write more about it. If you want to tell me more about what you like, write me at my e mail on yah. I think it's included in my profile now. kisss ash
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