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Disturbed as he Worked
Author: nightporter
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(Added on Dec 30, 2007)
(This month 11393 readers) (Total 23735 readers) |
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A house breaker is distrubed as he is working, by a mother and her young daughter, giving him the chance to humilate and play with their minds |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BBWdehumanizingyou
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Jun 2, 2008 |
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Ignoring the coding,it was very creative and entertaining. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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If the guys going to the trouble of debauching the women in front of each other, if hes already risking confinement, why exactly wouldnt he have raped them one or both? Definitely left me wanting more. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nemz
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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The story itself was interesting, but, for a pervert like me, the story left me wanting more. Overall a good read, although formatting does need to be worked on. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 1, 2008 |
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as mentioned by slaveneedledick, you need to adjust the codes on it, the story it self was good, i hope you plan to add more parts to it (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Dec 31, 2007 |
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The coding was wrong but the story was alright. (6/10)
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