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How I made my innocent wife my fuck slave Author: George C. Jones.
(Added on Nov 5, 2007) (This month 21659 readers) (Total 60053 readers)
Husband blackmails his innocent wife in to becoming his whore and sex slave

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Weighed Average (?): (5.5/10)
Average Rating: (5.5/10)
Highest Rating: (7/10)
Lowest Rating: (4/10)

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Reviewer: Razor7826 (Edit) Rating: Jan 3, 2008
The formatting, grammatical errors, and obviously missing words make this extremely difficult to read. It is hard to follow the characters actions or understand their characterization without proper formatting. Furthermore, I think doing so will allow you to analyze your own work better so that you may address the subtler problems.
EDIT: Oh, and you really need story codes. There are often unpleasant surprises in stories that lack codes (snuff or torture, namely) that many readers won't risk reading unlabeled submissions. (4/10)

Reviewer: ec1818 (Edit) Rating: Nov 21, 2007
it was a good story but i would like to read the rest of it if there is one thank you (7/10)

Reviewer: heycarrieanne (Edit) Rating: Nov 16, 2007
Perhaps English is not your first language? Your sentence structure is awful as is your formatting. You don't seem to have a clue what constitutes a paragraph or how to write a conversation that has proper punctuation. Your story idea and you topic are both good but don't quite make it. (5/10)

Reviewer: ladychipmunk (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2007
I really liked the story. However it was hard to read with the repeated "I said"s. Maybe some quotation marks would help. I also think some proof reading is in order. (5/10)

Reviewer: bbwsfslut (Edit) Rating: Nov 10, 2007
I liked your fantasy and storyline. You need some proof-reading and that could improve it. (6/10)

Reviewer: mkemse (Edit) Rating: Nov 7, 2007
not bad for a basic story but no real shick value, nothingi have not read nother stories, no original (6/10)

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