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The Display
Author: kinkracer
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(Added on Oct 7, 2007)
(This month 13859 readers) (Total 28859 readers) |
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Our hero seems to be little more than an object d' art at a party. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
DungeonMaster6
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Sep 2, 2011 |
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Liked the concept and the way it was told. Plus it was an enjoyable read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2009 |
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enjoyable (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Oct 13, 2007 |
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The Display is an oddly written tease. If it were written chronologically, it would have gone smoother. The apparent arm bondage should have been mentioned somewhere. There is a great story in there, and I look forward to part 2. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Oct 12, 2007 |
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The plot was good but the grammer and structure could be better. A few paragraphs that just seem to run together. Character development would have been nice also. But not a bad read but not an awesome read either. (6/10)
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