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    Midway Nightmares
    
    Author: Deadbeats
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    (Added on Oct 7, 2007)
            (This month 128172 readers) (Total 182453 readers) | 
   
   
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    A man is blackmailed by a 17 year old and his neighbor into slavery. | 
   
 
 
   
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    Mist
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    Apr 1, 2008 | 
   
   
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        very brutal! I can not wait to see more! (9/10) 
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        Very inventive and nicely brutal. I thought the 10th chapter was well done and a nice change. I look forward to more. Thanks (8/10) 
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        Very good imagination.  I can almost place myself in the subject's position.  A few typos but worth the read. (7/10) 
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    Jan 1, 2008 | 
   
   
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        great story even if not my favorite genre (9/10) 
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    Oct 22, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Great start - can't wait to see more.  Thank you. (8/10) 
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    Oct 12, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Heavy? Yes, and recommend due to that fact. Thanks for that heaviness. (8/10) 
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    Oct 11, 2007 | 
   
   
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        I am eager to see the next few chapters and then get to the part of the story where chapter one begins. well done so far (9/10) 
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    Oct 8, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Nice story, well written and not rushed. The plot spins out nicely and the scenes are well described. I liked it and thank you for your efforts. I look forward to more. (8/10) 
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    Oct 8, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Reasonably well written and certainly creative. Keep it going (8/10) 
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    Oct 8, 2007 | 
   
   
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        Very good plot well described a little confusion with the names but other then that well worth the read. (7/10) 
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