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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
(Edit) |
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Feb 8, 2009 |
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Mad Lews may find the start a tad 'scattered', but my guess is he didn't read "A Special Relationship" first.
The problem, so to speak, with this follow-up to "A Special Relationship", is that in the aformentioned, the stage had been completely set already.
As a consequence, "A Special Week-end" doesn't seem to add anything but what we already knew, bar the fact that the humiliation is taken out of the 'huit-clos' of Toni's apartment and extended to her work-area and leisure time.
But, since this is a sequel, people should first read its predecessor instead of getting all grumpy over a seemingly misplaced tale without a decent start and a rushed end.
Personally I feel that "A Special Week-end" should have been added as the next chapter in ""A Special Relationship" (which it clearly is) instead of posting it separately.
I like the story, shouldn't you be convinced of that already, because of the realistic portrayal of Toni and the inventiveness of the situations.
Charmingly nasty. Strange combination of words, maybe, but that's what just sprung to mind.
JJ (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 3, 2008 |
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why no codes, why no story line??
I can understand the storyline and codes being lost, that type of things hapens, but it only would havetaken maybe 5 minutes if that to renter both, the other issue i have withthe story is is read more like a script for a movie or playyhen a story, justfriendly advice and hopefully constructive critisms rather then negative
i have 1 story posted under a different name and made it a point to make sure boththe codes andstoryline where there so draw interest, I felt even if they review were notgreat for a 1st story, at leastthose reading it would know what codes were used and what the basic storyline was
Like buying a book without a cobver on it, may be a great book but you want some ideas what is between the pages (5/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Sep 11, 2007)
- Hi mkemse, as I replied to Trainman below, the synopsis got lost, as did the story codes. I assume it was either because they got lost in the pipeline or because Torq is still mastering the software. I cannot blame him in the circumstances. In fact, as far as I can see, this story hasn't even appeared yet on the Story Front Page, but only on my Author page. This is a follow up to 'A Special Relationship' which is a M/f story (same codes) as was made clear in what I originally sent to the site.
- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2007)
- I'm not sure if you have posted any stories mkemse but it isn't that easy to re-enter codes or a story line. I could re-send them but would still have to wait for Torq to update (unless you know some trick that I don't !).
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Sep 20, 2007 |
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Decent story, some of it is pretty good, but I don't like the way it ended so suddenly. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Sep 18, 2007 |
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Seemed a little scattered in the beginning. easy for a reader to get lost. Eventually the story came together and it was worth the time and effort. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
FootSlaveE
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Sep 14, 2007 |
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I'm not sure why others have reviewed this poorly. I loved it! I especially find the struggle with the humiliation extrodinarily erotic. It seems to me that you have really gotten into her head space, even if some of the activities are a bit extreme (not that I am complaining, that's what makes the story hot!)
I look forward to many more editions and adventures for Toni. Keep up the good work! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2007)
- Thanks Footslave. Yes, I'm not sure why this has been slammed (other than the lack of codes and synopsis which I've already explained). I actually wrote this sequel at the specific request of one or two readers very interested in cuckqueening but maybe Toni and George have had their 15 minutes of fame ?
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| Reviewer:
slaveneedledick
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Sep 13, 2007 |
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No codes and the story line was ok. (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Sep 9, 2007 |
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Sorry just could not get into it. Not quite my thing. Based on your other stuff probably quite good but... I'd rather see new chapters for "Five words"
Take care (8/10)
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- Replied by:
velvetglove
(Edit) (Sep 9, 2007)
- Hi trainman, this was the sequel to 'A Special Relationship' but the synopsis note got lost. I have already sent new Chapters of Five Words and Short N Sweet but they are in the 'pipeline' at present. The 'Special' series ('Relationship' and 'Weekend' and a third story in the trilogy) are 'M/f' with an emphasis on reverse cuckolding (cuckqueening) which is a specialist topic !
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