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O and H Davidson
Author: odalisque
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(Added on Aug 8, 2007)
(This month 51186 readers) (Total 59477 readers) |
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o goes for a motorcycle ride and pays the price |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Mar 14, 2010 |
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Well thought out, especially about masters regard for o's safety. Nasty dangerous things motorbikes - I should know after two stays in hospital from bike accidents. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Snark
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Aug 10, 2007 |
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Excellant development and presentation. Great details and descriptions. The envolvement helps the reader to share the circumstances without ever having experienced them personally. The common "being naked in a dream" feeling is as close as most people will get to o's predicaments, nevertheless the writer puts the reader's emotions into the scene very well. Waiting for many more chapters. (10/10)
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chksng19
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Aug 9, 2007 |
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Wonderful! A delightful and well-presented story, logical and fitting into 'o's' universe. This deserves publication in many places, so all can share your great effortl (10/10)
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