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First Dance Author: Rhabbi
(Added on Jul 4, 2007) (This month 47697 readers) (Total 49926 readers)
This is a romantic story about a woman giving herself to someone she wants to serve.

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Weighed Average (?): (6.5/10)
Average Rating: (8/10)
Highest Rating: (8/10)
Lowest Rating: (8/10)

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Reviewer: H Dean (Edit) Rating: Jul 7, 2007
I was a bit torn on this number rating. Did it deserve an 8 or a 9? Your writing style needs a bit of polish. Certain passages were a bit halting. There were also a few mistakes that should have been edited out. However, the story was told in a manner that worked very well. Your telling allowed me to feel the moment; visualize it. I could hear much of the music and I knew exactly how he was feeling - how he felt about the woman.
Really, this was quite good. (8/10)

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