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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Tavy
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Oct 18, 2011 |
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Very plausible. Well written. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
s1xer
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Jun 30, 2007 |
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Well, it kept me wanting for more, quite a tease, is it to be continued? (6/10)
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- Replied by:
susankarl
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2007)
- Thank you for your generous comments.
This was not really a story. I was just thinking what a man would probably think in those idle moments when the deeply hidden urges for a bit of nasty imagination start to turn on the thoughts of repressed lust.
Seriously. I usually fall asleep after letting my mind have a short meander over the ( perfectly normal and innocent) things I have done during the day, and then, quite often, I re-call a fumetti picture I have seen or a piece of someone elses' cruel story that sparked a reaction in my mind. Just for a while, I let those mental images wander, sometimes creating a quite awful series of events I would be unable to share with anyone in reality.
So I was wondering if a chap stuck out in the desert with very little sexual relief would think a bit like I do if he was tainted with that same dreadful kink. No story. No follow up. Just thought I might as well share my ideas with you.
Best wishes.
Susan.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 30, 2007 |
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Less than a story, more like a teaser for something longer. Literate and clear, but more an appetizer than an entree. Is there more? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
mike uk reader
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2007)
- I have the feeling this may be just a one off piece of erotic writing.
Perhaps the (Queen) Susan will inform you likewise.
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Jun 28, 2007 |
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It's certainly good to see Susan active again. I agonised over the score a little - if it were longer and had any sense of character, I would probably have given it an 8 or 9. I know not every story can be 'Cellar' (one of the all time greats), but it would be nice to revisit that sort of spirit and energy in the future, if that's what you desire, Susan! (7/10)
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- Replied by:
mike uk reader
(Edit) (Jun 30, 2007)
- I could not agree more with your comments made here."A Cellar Full Of Screams" will most proberly go down on this site as one of the all time spectacular classics from the amazing talents of this author.
Disposal By Dergrees is also in my opinon a very close second.
Finally,I wonder if Susan can perhaps enlighten us here what her future plans are regarding posting other stories and not just disappearing like a marjority of other authors seem to do on this site after our upmost appreciation of their works.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 28, 2007 |
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altho the idea is not my kind of story it was enjoyable to read (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mike uk reader
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Jun 28, 2007 |
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I feel like a spoilt child in a candy shop.
This may be short and reflected so in my rating.However,this small piece of erotic extreme fantasy writing from Susan is once again excellent and being a red blooded male connoisseur of this kind of fiction, I am not ashamed to admit that portions of this aroused me of my secret past thoughts and fantasies.
In my review of Susan's last story on this site I signed off by calling her the queen in my eyes of erotica and would just like to add here alot of other authors that contribute to the BDSM library should learn from you on how to weave a story and stimulate mine and others imagination.
Many thanks for your reply in the review section and you know me Susan, I will be ever greedy for more stories from your pen.
(8/10)
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