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Not what I wanted.
Author: fsadfadsfs
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(Added on Jun 15, 2007)
(This month 72751 readers) (Total 87721 readers) |
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My sister and I are forced into incest. |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 26, 2007 |
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Agree with the others that the format of the document is not easy to read.
However as I judge on the contents of the story, I went through it. The story is really not bad and has a nice degree of exitment.Therefor a 7.
Wud suggest that you re format it and your score will be much better.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
25toLife
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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This may be the longest paragraph I've ever seen, which in turn renders it unreadable. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Razor7826
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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You need to use the Enter key. AS the work stands now, it is virtually unreadable. (1/10)
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