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Race Queen
Author: TOXIS
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(Added on Jun 15, 2007)
(This month 28359 readers) (Total 47457 readers) |
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A female attorney from America is forced to face a new life working for OTTII. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
bmtphoenix
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Aug 9, 2007 |
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Incredible! Sad that some couldn't follow it. I guess it just goes to show Riki's level of confusion! A very rare 10 from me. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Aug 9, 2007)
- Thank you for the kind review. Much appreciated.
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| Reviewer:
H Dean
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Jul 26, 2007 |
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Original, erotic and well put together, This story is really a stand out. A couple of minor gaffes - typos - were present. Otherwise, the style and the language was quite right for this tale. This story is a minor edit from being perfect. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Thanks for the kind words. I've admired your work for some time. Best wishes.
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| Reviewer:
Night Writer
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Jul 15, 2007 |
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I've always loved this one - a pretty young female attorney transformed into not just a sex-slave, but an anime-like Japanese race queen. A reminder that the path between ambition and conformity can be very short. Original and well done, T, as usual. (10/10)
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TOXIS
(Edit) (Jul 27, 2007)
- Thanks. I've always thought you were one of the best and with a legitimate claim as the successor to Parker in style and quality. True Love needs a Chapter 5.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Jun 16, 2007 |
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Things do seem to jump around in this story, though it is an interesting concept. Is there more? (6/10)
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- Replied by:
TOXIS
(Edit) (Aug 15, 2007)
- Sorry, no. That's all there is. There was a yahoo group for a time that had follow on stories. Perhaps Dr. James Craft will post them. Look for stories based on OTTII.
By the way, I took a moment and checked mcstories. The Craft stories are posted there.
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Jun 15, 2007 |
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I have to say that I was confused as hell reading this story! I am not exactly sure of who did what and why, but ... it was interesting. Perhaps the next chapter might be clearer to me and perhaps without all the typos in this one. (7/10)
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