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Rape
Author: xox
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(Added on Feb 11, 2007)
(This month 48953 readers) (Total 59173 readers) |
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half true story |
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Average (?):  (3.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mirage
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Oct 6, 2007 |
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not as bad as I thought. ( read the reviews first then the story ) it's readable. it's hard to write a good erotic story that short. I read worse stories, this one wouldn't make the list on my "all time top 10 worst stories" (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Deputy Duffy
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Feb 14, 2007 |
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It was as bad as I thought it would be. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Feb 13, 2007 |
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Not a story, not a treatise, not a scenario. Maybe a pastiche, but a very limited one. Not sure which part is true and which not, but I'd guess the "walking down the street" to be true.
Try again, and use story codes so people know what to expect. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
JonMaddux
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Feb 12, 2007 |
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not that i am some writing genius myself but this isnt what i would really call a story, its more like a paragraph. I would say in my experience its almost impossible to write a coherent story about anything other than dick and jane thats this short. There may well exist a story this short that is the cats meow but i have found it. I would rewrite it, take your time, find someone to help proofread it and maybe one of the english major types on here to grammer check it and repost it. But thats just me. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
cala
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Feb 12, 2007 |
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An odd way to exorcise demons. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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This story is bad on every level from the grammar to the dialogue. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 11, 2007 |
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not much to it, too much dialog not enough eortica unless you plan to ad more in (5/10)
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