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His Obedient Pet
Author: Selkie
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(Added on Oct 7, 2006)
(This month 52685 readers) (Total 64093 readers) |
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Master puts his submissive through her paces over the course of a day ... ensuring she remains his obedient pet |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
The_Trainer
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Oct 10, 2006 |
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Interesting, at times intense at others arousing. I like it in terms of a short, short. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
dennisthmn
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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Nice love story (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Oct 8, 2006 |
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Obedience was commendable! Just a hint, of what lay in store thoughout the rest of the story, may have improved this cautionary tale? -Keep trying! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
heycarrieanne
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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This was a very interesting and intense storyline. It was well put together. I hope you continue it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
rce
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Oct 7, 2006 |
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Well told, but a bit boring in that it is about nothing else but sex games and arousal. There were nothing about the personalities, no history around their relationship. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
selkie
(Edit) (Oct 7, 2006)
- thanks rce - and you're quite right - ironically, normally my stories are very "character-driven" - I will be submitting further ones and you will see this - this was morea vignette! but thanks for taking the time to review
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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very nicely wrriten hope you add more (9/10)
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