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The slave Author: yoyo123
(Added on Sep 1, 2006) (This month 56543 readers) (Total 72174 readers)
Many enemas F/m cock and ball torture

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Weighed Average (?): (3/10)
Average Rating: (2.5/10)
Highest Rating: (4/10)
Lowest Rating: (1/10)

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Reviewer: slaveboy 6 (Edit) Rating: Dec 24, 2014
The potential was there, but this needed to flushed out more. Disappointing effort (4/10)

Reviewer: gremlin (Edit) Rating: Sep 3, 2006
Way too short. Scenes not fleshed out at all. Dialogue not well written and formatted horribly. Probably not a native English speaker. Nice try - the idea was ok - but the writing is horrible. (1/10)

Reviewer: Mistress M (Edit) Rating: Sep 2, 2006
I hated to review this story, but you need to go back to the drawing board and come back with something coherent. (2/10)

Reviewer: trainmanretep (Edit) Rating: Sep 1, 2006
total waste of time (2/10)

Reviewer: uktrucker100 (Edit) Rating: Sep 1, 2006
nice idae but put over like a child:-( (1/10)

Reviewer: Millie (Edit) Rating: Sep 1, 2006
I wish I could give this a higher rating but it really doesn't deserve it. Everything is rushed, the speech is presented incorrectly and the punctuation is almost nonexistant. You need to go back and start over, take your time and then get someone to read and correct it before you post it. (3/10)

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