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Temptation
Author: Barthol
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(Added on Aug 29, 2006)
(This month 53840 readers) (Total 67167 readers) |
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Pam has just embarked on a real estate career, when her childhood memories stir longings she cannot resist. These desires draw her two friends reluctantly into a web of sexual adventure and humiliation. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
oldwino
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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Nice start. Just a tease, too short. Nnot enough to get my gf wet. Difinite promise, but next chaspters must be much longer and nastier. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 31, 2006 |
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Good start, looking forward to reading more. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
geoff
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Aug 31, 2006 |
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Definitely heading in the right direction. The pedant in me say's get an editor and it would be an 8. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 30, 2006 |
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A fine beginning, but just a tease of where the tale could go. Anxious to see further additions posted. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Aug 29, 2006 |
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Really a good start. Good setup, good character, some tension, good inner life, and interesting. Keep it up. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 29, 2006 |
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a good start but need more to go on (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Gypsy
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Aug 29, 2006 |
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I too like the story to work into the climax. The story should be like the effort to seduce a woman for the first. Keep it up. (7/10)
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