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Owning PIta
Author: Joe Wilson, Pita Wilson
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(Added on Aug 22, 2006)
(This month 48696 readers) (Total 56982 readers) |
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Is this the first chapter of a BDSM Romance? "Touching Down" describes Joe and Pita's first day together, their fantasies, their plane ride (!), and forecasts "What Will Be" for them. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rabbit1
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Sep 3, 2006 |
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Very enjoyable reading ---I do not get much time to review stories but I had to take the time to say well done ---- (9/10)
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- Replied by:
her_Joe
(Edit) (Sep 3, 2006)
- Thank you for the support and interest, Rabbit, especially given the crunch of time ... it is appreciated. hJ
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| Reviewer:
Mistress M
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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I, uh, really liked this story. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
His_pita
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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I am so proud and happy for you. I have loved this story since I first read the rough draft and it's so nice to see others responding so well to it. I just know they will love the next chapters as much. Way to go Sir!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Sweep
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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Hi,
I really enjoyed your story. I really appreciate it when the female character has an identifiable personality and one can see her acceptance of BDSM in a very real way. It is what goes on in her head that is far more enjoyable and erotic than the physical events - exciting those descriptions may be. Sadly in many stories the woman is pretty single dimensional. I'd have rated you a 10 if the story had been longer. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
her_Joe
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
- Stay tuned, Sweep! Chapter 2 is coming -- when it's done, there should be 8 chapters. And thanks for the great feedback! Joe
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| Reviewer:
schoolboylv
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Aug 25, 2006 |
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Good Start, It is a little bit wordy at times. You don't need so much first person dialog. I'll re-review after the next chapter.... (7/10)
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- Replied by:
her_Joe
(Edit) (Aug 25, 2006)
- Thanks for reading, schoolboylv! I appreciate the input.
Not really sure what "first person dialog" is as it's all in limited third pov. Want to explain, please?
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