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A Father's Surprise
Author: D. Turner
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(Added on Aug 7, 2006)
(This month 56611 readers) (Total 76001 readers) |
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Jeff is a physician with a comfortable life until a letter with news of a daughter he never knew about changes everything. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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Highest
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| Reviewer:
chellebelle
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Jun 1, 2010 |
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Seemed a little too easy. (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
jobaech
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Sep 2, 2006 |
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This is a very nice start into a new story. For my opinion you move a little bit to fast to the next 'level'. I fully agree with La Toya, the daughter has to be more involved into this story, with teasing, with submitting and with with reactions.
I see forward to read more, hopefully soon. :) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
La Toya
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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This was a nice start to the story, (I would hope there is more to come). I found it to move a little to fast.
I think if you would have had her start to fire up her father the next day around the pool, then end up in bed with him. I think it would have worked a little better (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Nioce story, but I agree with the sylvia ber, that an intermediate step would have been perfect! (8/10)
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sylvia_ber
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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A nice start. A bit to fast for my taste, but nice! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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very well done, can't wait for more (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Master_chris
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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well done, I like the story so far, Please tell us, that there is more to this story, as I love to read it. (8/10)
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ElectricBadger
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Aug 8, 2006 |
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Well done, I love the action and the lost-daughter concept is a nice twist on the incest theme. I'd love to hear a bit more about what's led up to this -- about Becca and her mother's motivations. (8/10)
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Polecat
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Aug 7, 2006 |
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Very hot story. An excellent first effort.
Please tell me there's more to come. (8/10)
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