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A Violation On The Stairs
Author: SFCityDom
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(Added on Aug 4, 2006)
(This month 50154 readers) (Total 63305 readers) |
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A long day at the end of a long week. I take what ever I want. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Aug 9, 2006 |
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Very good story. To the point. The right details.
Sexy! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Aug 6, 2006 |
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You are getting quite good at the story telling, as proven by this short-short. A few more details would be nice,but overall I'd offer you three cheers for a well-told tale, (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
ElectricBadger
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Short, sweet, and to the point; great technically and with good voice. An excellent pick for a quick read, but needs a bit more plot, imagery, or ingenuity to really be memorable. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Aug 5, 2006 |
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Another one well done, i just love the way You write Sir! short, but with well chosen descriptive passages. the paragraph where He says 'she has the best cunt' that is soooo hot! thank You Sir.
blu (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SFCityDom
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2006)
- Thank you. A few well chosen words can go a long way.
-M
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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very nicely done as are most of your works (9/10)
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- Replied by:
SFCityDom
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2006)
- Thank you.
-M
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| Reviewer:
Millie
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Aug 4, 2006 |
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A nice short story. Explicit and to the point. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
SFCityDom
(Edit) (Aug 5, 2006)
- Sometimes you want five course meal. Other times a really good snack.
-M
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