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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
(Edit) |
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Jul 25, 2006 |
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A fine basis for a long tale. Good SF background, interesting concept. Some fine editing here and there would help: If a term is to be used, it should be consistantly used to acquaint the reader. (Such as "Kneeing by my Master"; if the term is 'kneeing' instead of the standard 'kneeling', don't use kneeling as a description earlier in the same section. Or vice-versa, of course.)
I'd like to see more of the tale. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Avralivia
(Edit) |
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Jul 12, 2006 |
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i enjoyed it, i hope to read more soon :) (7/10)
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