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The Client
Author: Justine DuCharme
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(Added on Jul 13, 2001)
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A young woman is targeted for a mystery client by an unscrupulous couple. They kidnap and begin to train her to the clients instructions. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
teamster
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Apr 10, 2004 |
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Good yarn as far as it goes... Using a male-female team of abductors is a kind of new wrinkle. Flesh it out more. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 6, 2004 |
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The previous reviews pretty much cover the spectrum appropriate to this story. Yes, hyphen666, there are 2.5 gazillion "Slave Abducted, Trained and Shipped" stories out there on the web. However, as slavegrl and mkemse note, this is a well written story with a reasonable suggestion of eroticism. For a little bit more of a twist, see this author's other story on this site "The Whipping Girl". (7/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 15, 2004 |
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the story seemed to go up and down, real erotic then cool down, was wondering if you planned to add anymore (8/10)
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slavegrl
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Dec 4, 2003 |
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Very short story but really well written...love the crate! (8/10)
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hyphen666
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Jul 16, 2001 |
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I cannot believe that someone is still writing this kind of story. My god, how many times and in how many ways can you describe the preparation and shipment of a slave? Couldn't you at least have put her in some kind of new container or sent her Fed Express, or done some thing that smacked of orginality.? (3/10)
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