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Dirty Little Sister
Author: enematic
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(Added on Mar 14, 2006)
(This month 128125 readers) (Total 201846 readers) |
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A boy discovers his younger sister has a kinky streak a mile wide, and decides to get in on the action. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
monty6869
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May 12, 2010 |
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Very great variety of fetishes. Story was well thought out and well written. Please continue the story. I am looking forward to reading more of your work (9/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2011)
- Thank you for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed my writing. I'm not planning on adding more to this story right now, but that doesn't mean that I won't suddenly be inspired to write another chapter.
Keep reading bdsmlibrary.com :-)
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theyoungandhopeless
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Jul 14, 2006 |
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First and foremost, I must say that your writing is phenomenal. As a writer myself (although nothing nearly as..........interesting as your work) I truly appreciate a good work of literature.
Of the story itself, I found that it was easy to lose myself in it, engrossing myself in the world you created. Your characters were belivable (although some situations seemed rather fantastic, but what is fiction for?).
Also, certian topics slightly stretched my tender sensibilities, but were presented very tastefully while retaining enough punch to statisfy fans. All in all a work of art in an area that could use more. Brava. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (May 19, 2007)
- I am most grateful for a positive review from a peer. Sorry that I have not been keeping up with this story - I've been working on other projects. As always, I continue to be astounded at the feedback that BDSMlibrary.com provides. This is truly a significant resource for the erotica writer.
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| Reviewer:
Lisa Jones
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May 15, 2006 |
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The subject matter is well outside my normal comfort zone and normally I wouldn't read stories like this but the power of your writing drew me in and held me and I read it engrossed to the end. You are particularly good at managing the graphic stuff without getting vulgar, a difficult art. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (May 16, 2006)
- I'm very grateful for your review. Thank you for your interest. I enjoyed reading your comments - I'm glad that people like this story. I continue to be surprised by how many readers / comments it draws.
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mmr253
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Apr 3, 2006 |
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Fantastic story, outstanding right from the start to the end (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Apr 3, 2006)
- Thank you for your review. It's great to hear how people have enjoyed the story. :-)
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bicyclerepairman
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Apr 2, 2006 |
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Excellent story, well written, good plot line and character development. Very believable. Respect bro! (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Apr 2, 2006)
- I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. :-)
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Malice
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Imaginative, it differentiates itself from the rest of the fiction in the database very well. There are alot of things I found disapointing or out of my comfort zone, but in the end it was both interestingly believable and at the same time filled with twists and turns that made every chapter its own interesting read. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Apr 1, 2006)
- I'm very grateful for your review. Thanks, Malice. :-)
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bigcat
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Apr 1, 2006 |
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Wow. Beastiality not my cup, but wow. (updated and upgraded) Incest isn't either, but this is one mind-blowing, extremely well written piece of wild, imaginative erotica. Hope to see moree from up. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 18, 2006)
- Thank you for your review. I'm glad you liked it anyway. :-)
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mr_slogan
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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An excellant story. You have a wonderful imagination. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 27, 2006)
- Thank you most kindly. :-)
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jip
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Mar 27, 2006 |
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Regret I canot quote higher as 10! Great sexual story. Sex plays between brothers/sisters or cousins are less unusual as people would think.
18 march 06: just read part 2 Increadible. regret I canot quote a second time a 10! Excellent. When part 3?
22 march: didn't like too much the scat part of the story in part 3
27 march: Enematic, with part 4 you bring the story again how I like it. Good scenario. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2006)
- I agree (not with the glowing praise, to which I cannot by any means object). Boys and girls have their own ways of experimenting, which don't always become known to parents or harm the sensibilities.
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enematic
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2006)
- Scat is an acquired taste (no pun intended). Thank you for still giving me a 9. :-)
- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 27, 2006)
- I hope you like part 5 as much - it's already submitted, so 'watch this space'. :-)
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Sylvana
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Mar 16, 2006 |
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Fun to read story, thanks for writing it.
Hope to read more of this story and from you in the future. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2006)
- I already submitted part 2 and have recently finished part 3. Part 4 is in progress - any requests? :-D Thank you for your review.
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Dododecapod
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Mar 15, 2006 |
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I enjoyed this story tremendously. For your little female protagonist to be quite so experienced is a stretch, but you pull it off well, and the erotic aspects of this tale are similarly excellent.
A most enjoyable piece. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 15, 2006)
- Thank you. You are too kind. :-) As to the accuracy of such things? Indeed, this is only fiction. I'm not trying to tell anyone's life story - just make people believe that such a story could be told. I try to populate my stories with believable details to lend credence to my characters - some are drawn from my own experiences and probably inappropriate for certain characters. I appreciate your input, most heartily. :-)
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Dododecapod
(Edit) (Mar 21, 2006)
- Having just read part two, I am greatly encouraged by your continuing quality, both of writing and of storytelling. To encounter such quality in both the craft and the art of writing is as great a pleasure as the erotic aspects of your story - which are quite tremendous.
- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 22, 2006)
- My continued thanks! I appreciate your comments very much - you are evidently a very learned individual and in firm control of language as a tool to convey meaning (or emotion). Sincerely - thank you for your critique: it means a lot to me. :-)
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| Reviewer:
J's blu
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Mar 14, 2006 |
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great stuff! i enjoyed it a lot. i dont usually go for incest tags but am glad i did. this is fast paced, witty! lol good characters, i like your style.
blu (9/10)
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- Replied by:
enematic
(Edit) (Mar 14, 2006)
- Hey, thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. I may get a third part out this week, so stick around. :-)
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