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A Night Out
Author: SFCityDom
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(Added on Mar 11, 2006)
(This month 49650 readers) (Total 60826 readers) |
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A warm evening out. A hot night inside. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
PetJulie
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Oct 11, 2008 |
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Very well written story. Descriptions got a reaction out of me. It was nice. ;) (9/10)
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Defiant Submissive
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Aug 29, 2008 |
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This story definitely caught my interest. I am hoping that future parts will engage me just as much, if not more than, "24 Hours," my favorite of the two stories I have read of yours. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mad Lews
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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A romantic D/s story with a bit of color and some depth, if you could let us take a peak at their motivations it would go a long way to making them real. That said an excellent story, one of the better ones seen here of late. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
jip
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Mar 13, 2006 |
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Like this romantic story. You will write what they did the remaining of the night? (9/10)
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J's blu
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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i like romantic D/s and this is ok. just a few things i found jarred me. if i may please Sir? when they are standing at the window, her back to Him, He suddenly says "DOnt fucking move!" that seemed a little out of whack to me. and from then on He seemed a little, (trying to think of the right word), -give up, cant think of the word!- anyway, for most of the story He seems rather Gentle Dom, and the sudden bursts of Darkness just seem out of place to me. also, the description of the places and food etc is good, but there doesnt seem to be a corresponding depth to the characters. but, all that said, i quite enjoyed it.
respectfully, blu (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
amkgjkcjk
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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The story line seems really familiar. The writing was good. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Mar 12, 2006 |
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i am not a big fan of consensual stories i prefer NC but this bay was well witten, hot flows real good and is realitic can't ask for more great job (10/10)
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