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Weighed
Average (?):  (4.5/10) |
| Average
Rating: (4.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
(Edit) |
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Sep 29, 2006 |
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i found it intresting and enjoyable (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bondage_man69
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Apr 27, 2006 |
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a good idea for a story, but little skill in the actual writing. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
Engineer
(Edit) |
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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A nice basic idea and a work of diligence, but the story is told too flat and simple, without actual erotic air or literary fascination. Several well-known and well-proven pieces of action lined up in succession, but no structure to be seen. A lot of mistakes in grammar, spelling and punctuation and several unexpected changes in the narrtor's person make it hard to understand the text, which adds further to the lack of attraction. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Mar 7, 2006 |
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The story is very detailed and long, but not really very good; it is written to a low level of understanding, not to people who are familiar with the female body.
There is just no "zing" in the story; no suspense, no passion, no excitement. It is just a plain telling of what is happening. (6/10)
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